Winooski School District

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Tatum MacBride

Our WMHS GX Champ of the Day…
Nominated by Brent Litterer
For the EWOC GX
In the dimension of Writing: Organization…. is
Tatum McBride

Tatum MacBride completed an excellent on-demand essay discussing conformity in One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest. While all parts of the essay were excellent, her organization, specifically her conclusion, showed considerable craft. To extend her point on the dangers of society, she wrote, “Kesey repeatedly portrays the disadvantages of always following the rules in an attempt to drive home the message that society’s version of normal is corrupt.” This conclusion takes the reader beyond the text, making a statement about the whole of society. Well done, Tatum.